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Post by Zuri Petteri on Nov 19, 2007 0:28:46 GMT -5
Club Relevant
A strange emotion to watch with intent The curiosity enraptured at club relevant Eyes that flicker, follow and gaze Young men, arrogant in phase
All your life, withdrawn;overspent Time passes, Life is hellbent On breaking down walls of convention On building them up with due contention
With bits and pieces Of shattered glass, raining faces Burning places in a world of dissention The curiosity of a mindful ascension
Causing breaks to the world below Finding following in her throw The throng of believers, informed or non All succumb to her con Promises given of educated bliss Yet we find a near miss
Grazing the walls of her contention Ricochet downward to her conventions Firing off the lead injection To break away from conviction Curiosity killed the cat. Always be mindful of that Drop a name, level a slant Curiosity is abundant Here, in the walls of Club Relevant m
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Legion
Local Legend
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Post by Legion on Nov 19, 2007 0:39:22 GMT -5
Zuzu...you're a really good writer!
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Jocelyn
Supreme Vampire
{S=0}The Lady of Corruption
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Post by Jocelyn on Nov 19, 2007 20:06:28 GMT -5
YAY! Go ZuZu
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beezil
Demon of Starlight
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Post by beezil on Nov 21, 2007 16:41:57 GMT -5
I really liked that. m
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Alauralai
Demon of Starlight
Fear my dancing pickle
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Post by Alauralai on Nov 29, 2007 20:42:43 GMT -5
I agree with Legion, you're an excellent writer.m
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